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Humble Beginnings

Every journey has a first step. Even if you fall and hit your face, or look (or in this case sound) like a moron, that first step is still vital.

The following are poems which I had written in my early high-school years. I admit that they contain no talent whatsoever, but it's important to show where one's humble beginnings were. I wrote these when I was young and naive and thought that poetry was just a jumble of words that rhymed. I've even inculded Haiku's, Free-verse, and other styles. They were written in 1994-97.

Why can't I be free?

Freedom is liberty
But what is Liberty?
Does it ever last
Does it come easily
Or dissolve completly?

When do we heal,
Does this pain ever stop?
Freedom: What is it?
My life is a vertical drop

Why can't I be free?
It is not fair
That they say it's there
And I dont have it
Why can't I be free?

I want to fly above the mountains
Yet my wings are clipped
Why can't I be free?
Why can't they see?

I want to sail the seas
Yet I have no sails
The wind wont pick-up
My craft is nothing
But wooden boards and nails

They say "Seek and ye shall find"
But that for which I seek
Cannot be found
WHy can't I be free?
My hands are completely bound

The world says "look at what you have"
But why can't they see
Why won't they see
Why do they refuse to see
I can never be free

But this will soon change
I will take control
But not on my own
I need another with no toll
To help me leave my worries back in town

It is not fair that they say it's there
And I do not have it
But I will have it
I will be free
I will be free

The Cure

The Day came by
when I thought you might die
But as I hoped
But as I prayed
Your angel did not fly.
It was not time
Now you'll be fine
In the arms of love that's pure
You're in the cure.

I once for a time
Thought hope was gone
But together we found
the will to carry on

Our hopes and dreams
Faded, but as it seems
OUr love will prevail
And heal like a holy grail
Our wounds may be mortal
But they are in our hearts,
But together, with faith
We'll mend the broken parts

It was almost good-bye
But now we'll survive
And love will always be
The Cure

The confusion and worry
Staying side-by-side
The vows will always stand
I'll never leave you behind.
The way we cared
The way we still do
For ever more
I'll be loving you

I told you before
I'd help you in need
I keep my word
I'm on bended knee
I love you too much
My heart beats for you
And I know our love
Will always be true.

"The Sparkling Eyes" Series

1) Her hair was swaying in the breeze
Bright, soft, and beautiful as the sun
Her eyes, blue as the sky
With a sparkle like a star
Were brilliant

2) Her sparkling eyes
Her beautiful, shining hair
Both soft and brilliant

3) She looked
Her eyes shining
Her smile lit up her face
Her look so beautifully charmed
SHe winked

4) Her eyes sparkled bright
They show peacefulness, softness
They look, caringly

White

White, a symbol of purity
A feeling of peace and solitude
A mood of happiness, of joy
Purity, it represents
No blackness, just clean

Love
Affection, Obsession
Looking, Thinking, Wishing
Flowers,Wine ---
--- Guns, Knives
Killing, Swearing, Hating
Disgust, Despise
Hate


"The Cure" was my first attempt at wrinting lyrics for music. (1996) I had goven it to an old Elementarty School teacher to add music to it, but BOY did it turn out bad!!!
It was so bad, in fact that I really struggled with my next attempt, which turned out to be "Why Can't I be Free".
THAT one went so bad that I never wrote any lyrics until
"This Rose From Me" in December of 1998.
The lyric thing never really got the "just right" feel until
"You know you're gonna miss me" in Febuary 2001